This is my third elevator pitch. On the last one, I had a lot of people tell me that I needed to stabilize my camera and go somewhere with better lighting. So for this one, I put my camera on a flat surface and tried to go somewhere with better lighting. Other than that, all of the feedback was positive and they agreed with my business plan!
https://youtu.be/m8qI249XtlI
Hi Laura! I think your restaurant idea is wonderful. I know you mentioned your camera stabilization and lighting problem in the last video, and your camera is definitely stabilized, but the lighting on one side of your face was still a little dark. I think midtown definitely needs a breakfast place that is convenient for those students who don't have cars and students who dont want to drive all the way out to peach valley on archer. Check out my blog! http://cassiespinner.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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